if u answer and leave a link with your answer to one of your questions, ill answer it:)
Stuffing her hands into her pockets she crossed the fresh snow avoiding the trees scattered around her. Her breath rose in waft tufts as she took another quick look behind her. No movement stirred between the trees, they were long gone. They left, she thought sighing, damn werewolves.
Stepping into the clearing of trees she exited the wood. West. What is west? She pondered struggling to piece their intentions together. They just keep traveling farther that direction, why?
The back porch of the cabin was visible now, she sped up her pace. When she reached the first steps of the cabin she stomped up them removing the clusters of mud and snow off the bottoms of her boots. The screen door Jayde entered through led right into the kitchen with full sight of the living room. The warmth engulfed her body.
“Ian?” she called pulling her scarf loose from her neck.
“I’m in the study,” he replied.
Walking down the long hall she pulled out her desiray by its gold chain from the leather satchel strung across her chest.
The wood creaked beneath her feet as she reached a weak spot. Passing her bedroom she stopped at the second door on the left. Leaning against the threshold she watched his fingers tap rapidly over the key board.
Biting the inside of his cheek, his forehead cringed, “Any luck with the trail?” He continued typing not looking up to her. Moving his hands off the keys he dropped his neck and picked up a pen. Scribbling on a piece of paper he said her name, “Jayde?”
Gripping the compact in her hand she stepped through and walked over to him. “They ran,” she said looking out to the window. She watched the sky grow darker, “They’re gone. The trail went dead, and when I opened my desiray it spun till I came to a clearing. They covered their tracks up to the mountain.”
Hearing him push his things around she turned back. His hands held the sides of his head and fingers pushed through his dark hair. The key board sat away from him with the paper and pen, “What direction are they headed to?”
Opening her hand she flipped open the compass lid. The gold dial twitched as the desiray read her mark. Once the needle rested she raised it for his eyes to see, “More West.”
or
Ian and Jayde moved a lot so packing wasn’t a big issue, mostly because they never really unpacked their things. Jayde never used her closets in the places they stayed at like Ian had, but he was a lighter packer.
Folding a pair of her faded jeans she set them on top of her clothes in the suit case. Zipping it shut she hauled it from the passenger seat to the back of the cab. "All ready?" she heard behind her. Turning she smiled weakly at her older brother who was shutting the front door behind him. She watched him as he circled around the truck to the other side.
"As always," her tone was exhausted, moving was getting harder the older she got. What if a time came around and she didn’t want to leave? Would that ever happen? Even if it did, she’d abandon the idea of staying, it was her and her brother; no one else mattered anymore.
Pulling herself off the ground she dropped into her seat. The engine croaked of age as he turned the ignition and put the car into drive. The 1980s truck was Ian and Jayde’s father’s, they had the money to sell and buy a new one but neither had the heart or strength to do it.
As they pulled off the gravel and to the road she relaxed at the thought, warmer weather is at least guaranteed. Looking into the side view mirror she watched the snow fall over the roof of the cabin Ian and her had lived in for the past three months, it was getting smaller as they gained distance. The cabin was old but sturdy, personally Jayde liked the house. It was in the middle of nowhere, just where she needed to be.
if u post a link to one of your questions with your answer ill answer yours:)
thank you!!
(BTW SHE IS NOT A WEREWOLF SHE IS A WEREWOLF HUNTER HER BRO IS NOR A WEREWOLF HE IS A HUNTER AND SHE DOES NOT FALL IN LOVE WITH A WEREWOLF)
would it be cliched if her brother fell in love with a werewolf? ive never read a book like that, have u?
jayde falls for another werewolf hunter that wants nothing to do with her:)
so thoughts?
sorry its long <3
orginally this is exaclty how the book starts, the top is the intro and then the second intro i asked if you prefer is right after, i jus thought if i cut out the beginning (the first option) people would like it more
if that doesn’t make sense:
if you don’t consider those both intros then the whole thing is my intro to the book, do you like it better with both? or should i cut off the first and start the story with the "Ian and Jayde moved a lot…"
thanks!