**Basic Plot**
Leonardo Cole Anderson was just your “average” kid. Sally, his mother, died when Leo was very little. Kevin, his dad, never really did get over the loss of his “Dearest Sally.” Kevin had gotten cancer. Time passes, and the doctors think they got it all.
Samuel, Kevin’s father had bought a 1967 Chevy Impala when it was new, and passed it on to Kevin. Leo decided to rebuild the engine as a birthday present for his dad. It was on that day that Kevin passed the Chevy onto Leo, and Leo found out his dad’s cancer came back.
The story starts with that scene.
Then, it goes on and Kevin dies. Leo has to go and live with his aunt in Oregon.
He said, fine, as long as the Chevy comes too.
Leo went and fixed everything wrong with the Chevy in his fathers’ memory. Along the way, he remembers all the good times he had in that car, with his dad, and with his grandpa.
One night, it was dark and the roads were slick. He never saw the other car coming. It ends with both the Chevy and the truck that was transporting gas going up in flames.
**Beginning**
Leo was covered in grease, but he sat down in that 1967 Chevy Impala anyway. He made sure the car was in park before he put the keys in the ignition, and turned on that beautiful, black car.
“Listen to this baby purr!” He exclaimed as his dad poured himself into the passengers seat.
“You’re getting grease all over the leather seats, son,” Kevin said with a smile as he shook his head.
“Hey, I just rebuilt the engine for you. You can deal with the grease spots,” Leo said with a grin. “Besides, I have to make sure this baby still runs.” Then he looked at his dad with his eyes shinning in excitement. "Can I drive her?"
“Son, she’s yours,” was Kevin’s response.
“No way? But you love this car.” Leo then looked closer at his dad’s eyes. “Dad, I thought the doctors got all of it.”
“I thought so too, Leo.” He sighed. “I thought so too.”
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So, my questions to you are:
-What do you think?
-Do you think I could pull off the type of story?
-Good, bad, boring?
-Keep going, or give up now?
-Questions, comments, improvements, anything?
Note: I’m just writing this for fun. I need something to do, and just want some opinions.
Brutal honesty please. I want to know what you really think, don’t sugarcoat it, and don’t suck up to me, because that’s not going to help me at all.
Thank you, so much for all of your time!
</3 Delilah
Even though I’m just writing for fun, I want to make it as good as possible. 
I know it’s cliche and has a lot of drama in it, but that’s just what I felt like writing. You can blame my subconscious for this one. It’s mostly based off a dream I had. All I really did was change the make and model of the car, oh, and give a reason for the mom being gone and all the sadness and anger in Kevin.
I hope that made sense.
Put mythical creatures in this? Oh yeah, totally. Blood sucking vampires, werewolves that go around biting people, and faeries that fly from place to place! :/ It just doesn’t fit with the story, but I’ll see what I can do Elena.
@ Jasper: I haven’t decided if he’s going to have one or not, but he does have a really close friend named Emma.
Oh, two more questions:
-If I said I was possibly going to change names, what would your suggestions be?
-If I were to use a mythical creature, which one should it be?
@ CJ: Glad to see you’re still alive 